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Chained Angel

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Literature Text

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If you would have wings, you said you will fly,

leaving me behind, I thought as I cry,

when you had your wings, I made up a lie,

the moment you'll go, I said I will die.

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I grasped tight at your wings as your tears start to flow,

I have put you on chains forbidding you to go,

you've always wished to fly, that, I have always known,

but me to be alone, your freedom I have thrown.

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You are always dreaming the vast sky that's so bright,

and in the velvet night you will shine as a light,

and if you will now fly, it's such joy in my sight,

but if I am down here, for me it isn't right.

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The cage has been broken, oh, yourself you have freed,

at last! You are flying, "goodbye", all have I bid,

but then you have returned just to hold me so tight,

oh, why didn't you say, you'll take me in your flight.
wee, i finally got a better title...
this tells a story of a chained angel... i used chained instead of the former.. caged.. because this poem tells about two kinds of chains... one that binds and one that links..
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was the rhyming okay?
usually, i used deep words in my poems but i made this one as simple as possible ( well, i wrote this when I was still 17 so maybe the lack of vocabulary made it simple, hehe)...

well, was the simplicity okay?
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MadameAquaria's avatar
i like it very much! the rhyming is great, although i agree with a previous comment in that some of the rhythem is off. lovely nontheless:D